Comments on: Mystery Writing

By: Brittany

Brittany — Fri, 12 Oct 2007 12:57:02 +0000

There was this girl named Ari. Ari had just moved into her new house. At 12:00 in the afternoon she would hear cats start to meow till dawn. In the night at 9:00 she would hear little creaking noises under her stairs to her basement. And when she went to the basement she disappeared.

By: Ari

Ari — Fri, 12 Oct 2007 12:55:35 +0000

Sara had just moved in to her new house last week! But she was still mysterious about her new house like at night she would hear creaking noises in the basement,little mice feet trampling in the night,or ghosts sounds.But the scary thing is there would be a pattern in the nights that it happens in.On Monday she would hear ghosts sounds,On Wenesday she would hear the feet of mice trampling in the night!!! TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By: kayler

kayler — Fri, 12 Oct 2007 12:55:12 +0000

Once upon a time there was a myth of a boogie man name Mr.Fowler! he was nown to kidnape little kids and take them to his lair. When

By: Niah

Niah — Wed, 10 Oct 2007 12:57:15 +0000

Jenny had just moved into her new house in Minnesota. Her brother had just got his new driver’s license and offered to take her for a ride. He started to drive really fast. “slow down” Jenny said. “these are the back roads, nobody is watching” her brother said. “Watch out for that car!” Jenny yelled. But it was too late. Her brother had crashed. The other car plummeted into the lake. The story was all over the news.
Every night Jenny would see a girl floating by her window. It looked just like the girl they had crashed into. Finally Jenny decided to figure out why this ghost wouldn’t leave her alone. That night when she saw the woman she yelled “what do you want!’ The ghost pointed at her brother. Jenny finally understood. Her brother had crashed on purpose. But then she looked at the man standing next to him. She recognized him as the man who was driving the car they crashed into. he’s the one who crashed on purpose Jenny thought.

By: Brittany

Brittany — Wed, 10 Oct 2007 12:56:38 +0000

Cassidy and I where walking down the street to her house and when we got to her house all of a sudden her mom was yelling “Someone took all of the orange juice for my party!!!” Cassidy and I looked at each other and she said “What can we do to help?” Her mom said “Anything but find my orange juice and the only person in the house was your dad Cassidy.” Can you figure out who did it????

By: ari

ari — Wed, 10 Oct 2007 12:55:08 +0000

What was that? Sara,Sara, is that you?Don’t try to scare me!It’s not funny!Boom,Boom!Ahhhhhh!Boom,Boom!Ahhhh!